Little bit disappointing after the long wait - but it was pretty damn funny.
HOLY FUCKING HELL ITS HELVETICA!!!!!!1111ONE
This was really well done. I love the graphic style as well as the animation. The only fault is that I would love these to be longer, because they're THAT good.
Can't wait to see more from you!
Cool flash, but kind of corny joke.
Me likes it! Can't wait for more!
Listen, it's just not that good. You have a great story, but the lack of lip sync and character variation kind of makes it all fall apart.
Here's what you should do next time:
1. Get some more lip sync expirience. This makes a huge difference.
2. Don't rely on motion tweens. Actually frame-by-frame some stuff.
3. Some more line variation. This makes your characters breath life. Also, don't use the shape tools as a crutch.
4. Maybe some painted backgrounds would look really nice.
Like I said, it's pretty funny, but needs some work to truly get out there. Good luck!
Ok, I'll take your advice.
You have an idea, but perhaps imporving your technique could make things better. For instance, maybe a shorter intro or smoother drawings.
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