cizmic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SUPERISH]

Little bit disappointing after the long wait - but it was pretty damn funny.

[B - Helvetica]

HOLY FUCKING HELL ITS HELVETICA!!!!!!1111ONE

[Vice Versa]

This was really well done. I love the graphic style as well as the animation. The only fault is that I would love these to be longer, because they're THAT good.

Can't wait to see more from you!

[Trolls Trolling Trolls]

Cool flash, but kind of corny joke.

[Arnold's Automobile Rent]

Me likes it! Can't wait for more!

[The Bikers: Episode 1 2/2]

Listen, it's just not that good. You have a great story, but the lack of lip sync and character variation kind of makes it all fall apart.

Here's what you should do next time:
1. Get some more lip sync expirience. This makes a huge difference.
2. Don't rely on motion tweens. Actually frame-by-frame some stuff.
3. Some more line variation. This makes your characters breath life. Also, don't use the shape tools as a crutch.
4. Maybe some painted backgrounds would look really nice.

Like I said, it's pretty funny, but needs some work to truly get out there. Good luck!

Houston557 responds:

Ok, I'll take your advice.

[Jokes - Elevator Blues]

You have an idea, but perhaps imporving your technique could make things better. For instance, maybe a shorter intro or smoother drawings.